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    Senior Hostboard Member Hannibal's Avatar
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    There was this one time,

    When I felt myself pull the pin,
    and could feel the way our conversation just

    grenaded.

    The ceiling was the only friend I had
    To cradle me as the life ran from my body
    from your words
    All I could do was wonder

    Where I went wrong.

    Once the tingling stopped
    I closed my eyes and fell into slumber
    wrapping my arms around myself so I could imagine
    That you were there cradeling me
    While I died in silence.

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    Wow, this is so sad. I like the way that you made grenaded a verb. It says it best I think.

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